Yugioh 5D's Revolution - Forum
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.
Yugioh 5D's Revolution - Forum

This is the new Forum by FeatherCrow33 and Guthvin54. The Forum has something for everyone, so have fun here!


You are not connected. Please login or register

[OFfICIAL TOPIC] Result of Aspirants to C.C.T

3 posters

Go down  Message [Page 1 of 1]

DxKain

DxKain
Card Creator
Card Creator

FIRST: i have the permission from FeatherCrow33 to create this topic, if something is not of your pleasure, communicate it to him.

SECOND: the C.C.M than not cooperate in this topic like a C.C, automatic they will be reported to FeatherCrow33.

Number 1

Name: DragonLord-Akrilnax
Attribute: fire
type: dragon/synchro
lvl 10
atk: 2800 or 3000
def: 2400 or 2500
effect: this card is unaffected by the effects of monsters that have a lower atk than its own. if this card would be destroyed, you can switch the target to another dragon-type monster on the field.

Number 2

Name: Staravian Dragon
Attribute: wind
lvl: 6
type: Dragon effect
attack: 2300
def: 2000
effect: during your standby phase, you can select one of the following effects 1) when this card attacks and destroys opponents monster, inflict damage to the number of dragons in the grave x100.

2) Increase this card's atk by 500

Number 3

Dragon's Fury

Type: Spell card (Normal)

you can only activate this if your opponent controls a monster that has a higher atk then the highest atk dragon-type moster on your field. That monster atk becames = to opponents monster Atk +500. Other monsters you control cannot declare an attack.



we (card creators team) will rate your cards, so now i only lef a comment about every card

DRAGON LORD AKRILNAX:

- first, you may said what monster do this summon, but is a detail, as lvl 10 monster the atk and def are not bad, but it may have a bit more of each(f.e 3300-3500 atk), the effs are good, but, as a high level monster it may have a secondary eff affecting the same, however is a great idea.

STARAVIAN DRAGON:

- the atk-def-lvl balance is good!! (may 2500 atk) , first eff is good, however i may play with the eff, for example, in the first eff it may "destroy a atk position monster". The second i may said "if this card atk a defense position monster inflict the diference to the opponent life points", good card!

DRAGON'S FURY:

- nothing to said, great card!!!!



Ratings:
Balance: 8/10
OCG: 7/10
Idea: 8/10

My Final Result: 7.6/10

Well, now i need the Ratings of the other C.C.M.







Last edited by DxKain on Wed Nov 10, 2010 1:45 am; edited 2 times in total

DxKain

DxKain
Card Creator
Card Creator

https://s152.photobucket.com/albums/s197/tkow90/Silents/

30 cards

2 Normal Monsters (1 Tuner)
17 Effect Monsters (4 Tuners)
1 Ritual Monster (1 Dark Tuner)
4 Synchro Monsters
1 Dark Synchro Monster
1 Fusion Monster
3 Spells
1 Trap

Obviously if one were to make a deck using the Silents, some of the monsters would be doubles and there would be other spells and traps included.

Silent Reaper's effect (in case you can't read it):
[Fiend/Dark Synchro/Effect]
"Dark Tuner Silent Demon" + "Silent Fiend"
This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing the specified cards from your side of the field. This card can only be Special Summoned once per duel. When this card is summoned, destroy all other monsters on your side of the field then Special Summon 1 "Silent Thunder Bringer" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. This monster cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.
ATK/0 DEF/3000



I also have a character created who uses the deck.


My opinion:
The Idea of the cards are great i can negate it, but i must said it, the balance of the cards are BAD!!, and the OCG are not good, but the effects are good.

if you said of you have the PJ at this time, i think is better if you are in the Art Designers, we need artists to do the PJS.

Rating:
Balance: 3/10
OCG: 5/10
Idea: 9/10

My final result: 5.6

DxKain

DxKain
Card Creator
Card Creator

I have been a fan of Yu-gi-oh! for a long time and I like to make my own customized cards.

Name: Junk Breaker
Level: 2
Attribute: Dark
Type: Warrior
Atk: 1600 Def 500
Effect: Once this card is successfully summoned, you can discard up to 3 monster cards with the name "Junk" to increase it's attack points by 200 for each. When you control a synchro monster with the name "Junk", you can tribute this card to destroy a card on the field. When this card is destroyed, the controller takes 1000 life points of damage.

Name: Junk Appraiser
Level: 2
Attribute: Earth
Type: Warrior
Atk: 500 Def: 1000
Effect: When this card is sent into graveyard, you can add up to 2 monster with the name "Junk" in it from your graveyeard to your hand.

Name: Junk Kid
Level: 1
Attribute: Dark
Type: Warrior
Atk: 100 Def: 300
Effect: When this card is on the field, you can tribute this card to special summon a monster with the name "Junk" in your hand. If this card is used as a synchro material for a "Junk" synchro monster, you can draw a card.


Name: Junk Gunner
Level: 6
Attribute: Light
Type: Warrior/Synchro
Atk: 2400 Def: 1600
Junk Synchron + 1 or more non-tuner monster
Effect: When this card is synchro summoned, look the top 2 cards of your deck. If there are any monster cards revealed this way, special summon it with its effect
negated, if it is a spell or trap card, sent it into your graveyard. Once per turn, you can tribute a monster to allow this monster to attack directly. After battle
calculations, remove this card from play. During your next end phase, special summon this card if it was removed from play this way. When this card is special
summoned, it gains 500 attack points.

Junk Engineer
Level: 4
Attribute: Earth
Type: Warrior/Synchro
Atk: 2000 Def: 2000
Junk Synchron + 1 non-tuner monster
Effect : Once per turn, you can discard a card from your hand to draw a card. If there are more than 3 "Junk" monsters in your graveyard, you can remove a "Junk" monster from your graveyard to gain it's attack points until end phase.If it is removed that way, that monster can be special summoned during your end phase.

Name: Junk Creator
Level: 4
Attribute: Earth
Type: Warrior
Atk: 1000 Def: 1100
Effect: Once per turn, you can discard a card to special summon a machine or warrior type monster with 1500 atk or below. This card can only be used as a synchro material for a synchro monster with the name "Junk"


Name: Junk Lancer
Level: 8
Attribute: Dark
Type: Warrior/Synchro
Atk: 2800 Def: 2100
Effect: This card gains 100 attack points for every "Junk" monster in the graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove from play one "Junk" monster card from the graveyard
to decrease a monster card attack points to zero until end phase. If this card is affected by a card effect, you can negate it by discarding a face-down spell or trap card.

Name: Junk Blade Master
Level: 9
Attribute: Earth
Type: Warrior/Synchro
Atk: 2900 Def: 2100
Junk Synchron + 2 or more non-tuner warrior monster
Effect: When this card is synchro summoned, you can discard up to 2 monster cards from your hand. If you do so, deal damage equal to half of the monster cards discarded to the opponent. Once per turn, you can discard up to 2 cards from your hand to destroy the same amount of cards that are discarded. If this card destroys a monster, your opponent takes damage equal to the destroyed monster's effect.

Name: Junk Divider
Level : 12
Attribute: Light
Type: Warrior/Synchro
Atk: 4200 Def: 3000
Junk Synchron + Junk Warrior + 1 or more non-tuner monster
Effect: This card cannot be affected by any card effects. If you control 2 or more monsters on your field, you can tribute them to destroy all cards on your opponent's
field. If this effect is activated, this card cannot attack until your 2nd battle phase. If you have 5 or more "Junk" monsters in your graveyard, you can activate the following's effect- 1.Your opponent cannot activate any magic or trap card. 2. Tribute one monster on your field to deal damage equal to the tributed monster's effect.

Name: Junk Lancer
Level: 8
Attribute: Dark
Type: Warrior/Synchro
Atk: 2800 Def: 2100
Effect: This card gains 100 attack points for every "Junk" monster in the graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove from play one "Junk" monster card from the graveyard to decrease a monster card attack points to zero until end phase. If this card is affected by a card effect, you can negate it by discarding a face-down spell or trap card.

My opinion:
the Idea is good, but you know, this cards exist, the balance in general is good, but you have only one fatal error, the atk and def/lvl of junk breaker (1600 is to big!!!!), there are some other errors but your ideas are good.

Rating:
Balance: 5/10
OCG: 6/10
Idea: 9/10

My final result: 6.6

leonhartzcross

leonhartzcross
Newbie

DxKain wrote:
My opinion:
the Idea is good, but you know, this cards exist, the balance in general is good, but you have only one fatal error, the atk and def/lvl of junk breaker (1600 is to big!!!!), there are some other errors but your ideas are good.

Rating:
Balance: 5/10
OCG: 6/10
Idea: 9/10

My final result: 6.6

I see. I'll lower Junk Breaker atk into 1200. Can you also tell me the other errors i made?

DxKain

DxKain
Card Creator
Card Creator

WARNING: IF THE C.C.M DONT ANSWER ON THIS TOPIC UNTIL 24 MORE HOURS, AUTOMATIC THEY WILL BE REPORTED TO FEATHERCROW33

Glacier_LOH

Glacier_LOH
Card Creator
Card Creator

DxKain wrote:FIRST: i have the permission from FeatherCrow33 to create this topic, if something is not of your pleasure, communicate it to him.

SECOND: the C.C.M than not cooperate in this topic like a C.C, automatic they will be reported to FeatherCrow33.

Number 1

Name: DragonLord-Akrilnax
Attribute: fire
type: dragon/synchro
lvl 10
atk: 2800 or 3000
def: 2400 or 2500
effect: this card is unaffected by the effects of monsters that have a lower atk than its own. if this card would be destroyed, you can switch the target to another dragon-type monster on the field.

Number 2

Name: Staravian Dragon
Attribute: wind
lvl: 6
type: Dragon effect
attack: 2300
def: 2000
effect: during your standby phase, you can select one of the following effects 1) when this card attacks and destroys opponents monster, inflict damage to the number of dragons in the grave x100.

2) Increase this card's atk by 500

Number 3

Dragon's Fury

Type: Spell card (Normal)

you can only activate this if your opponent controls a monster that has a higher atk then the highest atk dragon-type moster on your field. That monster atk becames = to opponents monster Atk +500. Other monsters you control cannot declare an attack.



we (card creators team) will rate your cards, so now i only lef a comment about every card

DRAGON LORD AKRILNAX:

- first, you may said what monster do this summon, but is a detail, as lvl 10 monster the atk and def are not bad, but it may have a bit more of each(f.e 3300-3500 atk), the effs are good, but, as a high level monster it may have a secondary eff affecting the same, however is a great idea.

STARAVIAN DRAGON:

- the atk-def-lvl balance is good!! (may 2500 atk) , first eff is good, however i may play with the eff, for example, in the first eff it may "destroy a atk position monster". The second i may said "if this card atk a defense position monster inflict the diference to the opponent life points", good card!

DRAGON'S FURY:

- nothing to said, great card!!!!



Ratings:
Balance: 8/10
OCG: 7/10
Idea: 8/10

My Final Result: 7.6/10

Well, now i need the Ratings of the other C.C.M.





OK, sheesh. Like I've said before, You have what it takes to be part of this crew and so on. I've already reviewed him before, I don't need to do it twice.

Glacier_LOH

Glacier_LOH
Card Creator
Card Creator

DxKain wrote:https://s152.photobucket.com/albums/s197/tkow90/Silents/

30 cards

2 Normal Monsters (1 Tuner)
17 Effect Monsters (4 Tuners)
1 Ritual Monster (1 Dark Tuner)
4 Synchro Monsters
1 Dark Synchro Monster
1 Fusion Monster
3 Spells
1 Trap

Obviously if one were to make a deck using the Silents, some of the monsters would be doubles and there would be other spells and traps included.

Silent Reaper's effect (in case you can't read it):
[Fiend/Dark Synchro/Effect]
"Dark Tuner Silent Demon" + "Silent Fiend"
This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing the specified cards from your side of the field. This card can only be Special Summoned once per duel. When this card is summoned, destroy all other monsters on your side of the field then Special Summon 1 "Silent Thunder Bringer" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. This monster cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.
ATK/0 DEF/3000



I also have a character created who uses the deck.


My opinion:
The Idea of the cards are great i can negate it, but i must said it, the balance of the cards are BAD!!, and the OCG are not good, but the effects are good.

if you said of you have the PJ at this time, i think is better if you are in the Art Designers, we need artists to do the PJS.

Rating:
Balance: 3/10
OCG: 5/10
Idea: 9/10

My final result: 5.6
Again, already reviewed.

Glacier_LOH

Glacier_LOH
Card Creator
Card Creator

DxKain wrote:I have been a fan of Yu-gi-oh! for a long time and I like to make my own customized cards.

Name: Junk Breaker
Level: 2
Attribute: Dark
Type: Warrior
Atk: 1600 Def 500
Effect: Once this card is successfully summoned, you can discard up to 3 monster cards with the name "Junk" to increase it's attack points by 200 for each. When you control a synchro monster with the name "Junk", you can tribute this card to destroy a card on the field. When this card is destroyed, the controller takes 1000 life points of damage.

Name: Junk Appraiser
Level: 2
Attribute: Earth
Type: Warrior
Atk: 500 Def: 1000
Effect: When this card is sent into graveyard, you can add up to 2 monster with the name "Junk" in it from your graveyeard to your hand.

Name: Junk Kid
Level: 1
Attribute: Dark
Type: Warrior
Atk: 100 Def: 300
Effect: When this card is on the field, you can tribute this card to special summon a monster with the name "Junk" in your hand. If this card is used as a synchro material for a "Junk" synchro monster, you can draw a card.


Name: Junk Gunner
Level: 6
Attribute: Light
Type: Warrior/Synchro
Atk: 2400 Def: 1600
Junk Synchron + 1 or more non-tuner monster
Effect: When this card is synchro summoned, look the top 2 cards of your deck. If there are any monster cards revealed this way, special summon it with its effect
negated, if it is a spell or trap card, sent it into your graveyard. Once per turn, you can tribute a monster to allow this monster to attack directly. After battle
calculations, remove this card from play. During your next end phase, special summon this card if it was removed from play this way. When this card is special
summoned, it gains 500 attack points.

Junk Engineer
Level: 4
Attribute: Earth
Type: Warrior/Synchro
Atk: 2000 Def: 2000
Junk Synchron + 1 non-tuner monster
Effect : Once per turn, you can discard a card from your hand to draw a card. If there are more than 3 "Junk" monsters in your graveyard, you can remove a "Junk" monster from your graveyard to gain it's attack points until end phase.If it is removed that way, that monster can be special summoned during your end phase.

Name: Junk Creator
Level: 4
Attribute: Earth
Type: Warrior
Atk: 1000 Def: 1100
Effect: Once per turn, you can discard a card to special summon a machine or warrior type monster with 1500 atk or below. This card can only be used as a synchro material for a synchro monster with the name "Junk"


Name: Junk Lancer
Level: 8
Attribute: Dark
Type: Warrior/Synchro
Atk: 2800 Def: 2100
Effect: This card gains 100 attack points for every "Junk" monster in the graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove from play one "Junk" monster card from the graveyard
to decrease a monster card attack points to zero until end phase. If this card is affected by a card effect, you can negate it by discarding a face-down spell or trap card.

Name: Junk Blade Master
Level: 9
Attribute: Earth
Type: Warrior/Synchro
Atk: 2900 Def: 2100
Junk Synchron + 2 or more non-tuner warrior monster
Effect: When this card is synchro summoned, you can discard up to 2 monster cards from your hand. If you do so, deal damage equal to half of the monster cards discarded to the opponent. Once per turn, you can discard up to 2 cards from your hand to destroy the same amount of cards that are discarded. If this card destroys a monster, your opponent takes damage equal to the destroyed monster's effect.

Name: Junk Divider
Level : 12
Attribute: Light
Type: Warrior/Synchro
Atk: 4200 Def: 3000
Junk Synchron + Junk Warrior + 1 or more non-tuner monster
Effect: This card cannot be affected by any card effects. If you control 2 or more monsters on your field, you can tribute them to destroy all cards on your opponent's
field. If this effect is activated, this card cannot attack until your 2nd battle phase. If you have 5 or more "Junk" monsters in your graveyard, you can activate the following's effect- 1.Your opponent cannot activate any magic or trap card. 2. Tribute one monster on your field to deal damage equal to the tributed monster's effect.

Name: Junk Lancer
Level: 8
Attribute: Dark
Type: Warrior/Synchro
Atk: 2800 Def: 2100
Effect: This card gains 100 attack points for every "Junk" monster in the graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove from play one "Junk" monster card from the graveyard to decrease a monster card attack points to zero until end phase. If this card is affected by a card effect, you can negate it by discarding a face-down spell or trap card.

My opinion:
the Idea is good, but you know, this cards exist, the balance in general is good, but you have only one fatal error, the atk and def/lvl of junk breaker (1600 is to big!!!!), there are some other errors but your ideas are good.

Rating:
Balance: 5/10
OCG: 6/10
Idea: 9/10

My final result: 6.6
OK, I'll make this brief compared to my other reviews.

Rating

Balance: 4/10
OCG: 6/10
Idea: 8/10

Final Score: 6.6

~Review~
It just odd to see an Atlas fan make "Junk" theme cards, just saying. Enough with the small talk; reason for what your score. Well the text for the cards are a bit sloppy, the idea is ingenious for the theme etc. and the balance could use a bit more work but a little work can fix that problem real easy.

So, there you have it,
~Glacier_LOH~

DxKain

DxKain
Card Creator
Card Creator

AMEDEE A JONASHOLMES ARE IN DANGER TO BE EXPULSED OF THE CCT, THIS IS THE LAST WARNING...

WE NEED PEOPLE FOR THE ART DESIGNER TEAM (ADT), WHO KNOWS USE PHOTOSHOP AND THAT KIND OF PROGRAMS TO DO THE ART FOR THE CARDS, VOLUNTARIES SENDS ME PM

Sponsored content



Back to top  Message [Page 1 of 1]

Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum